All Comments on 'Can't Stand the Rain'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Couldn't you make it a little more vivid?

Of course not. You have put the seal on the proper writing of erotic literature and I salute you and thank you. Ronnie W.

The watcherThe watcheralmost 19 years ago
Damn..gurl..you can write!!!

Great vivid story telling.

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