All Comments on 'Captive 813'

by CateredContentQueen

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well, she started out with a brain. Then magical dick took over.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

this was SO hot! absolutely loved it, thank you :)

kkjr88kkjr88over 2 years ago

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Fantastic storytelling and plot. This was not just a story of sex, like most stories. Instead sex became a part of the story. Excellent details and descriptions, especially at the beginning. Six out of 5 stars in my opinion. Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This made my night!

A_ComplexHoeA_ComplexHoeover 2 years ago

Well written great content

ChickwhichChickwhichover 2 years ago

On the longer side for my tastes but really fucking hot! Thanks :)

dnsontndnsontnover 2 years ago

Beautifully written, CCQueen. Five Stars

UnderscoreRedheadUnderscoreRedheadover 2 years ago

Great writing! This is a favorite for sure!

ChasmaChasmaover 2 years ago

Love it! Please, continue the story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
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This needs to continue as a series and not just as a one off! It reminds of one of those free teaser chapters, I read over at Amazon, just to get me to buy the actual book.

You did it!

I'm hooked!

More please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This one is crying out for another installment.

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Publishing Under: Vivian Night (Kindle) https://linktr.ee/viv_night I am a self-published author who continues to dabble in new ideas or characters. Content on here may be early attempts at inspiration prior to publishing, if I choose to publish. If a story of mine has been t...