All Comments on 'Red X: Captives'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
wrong tag?

I fail to see where a "harem" came into play here.

Barrett_C_CarverBarrett_C_Carverabout 4 years agoAuthor
"Harem" tag:

'Harem' refers to the pleasure yacht full of sex-slaves being sampled by wealthy men.

It's a thematic element, even though the heart of this story is monogamous. I see your point - thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good story. Nice action. Only thing, his assignment ended too early: bad guys dead, damsels rescued. I was expecting a double-cross in the final 4 pages and you only had three choices: Ginny, Selene and Prija- unless it was the Agency itself giving the first two orders. Glad to see the good guy get his just reward. She already knows what he is. (Like the scene from True Lies: "Did you ever kill anybody?" "Ja- but they were all bad.") 5*

Anon56

Barrett_C_CarverBarrett_C_Carverabout 1 year agoAuthor

Anon56:

Thanks for the feedback - I appreciate it!

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