All Comments on 'Captured by the Elves Ch. 13'

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sarakoessarakoesabout 1 year ago

Thank you so much for the amazing story <3

ArtickArtickabout 1 year ago

Loved it and your others. Thank you

LiterKnightLiterKnightabout 1 year ago

Well, I guess that's it. Sort of feels like the end of an era, I think. Can't wait to see what you end up writing next (especially if it's in the same setting)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Congratulations on completion! Thank you for this story.

I look forward to more stories of this world from you.

IvrioneIvrioneabout 1 year ago

Words fail in such moments beyond, "Thank you". <3

notbreckenridgenotbreckenridgeabout 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you all for your interest and support. There is always a strange excitement and anxiety after I submit a story. The enthusiasm that you folks show makes the difficult parts worth it.

ShortyMacShortyMacabout 1 year ago

I think the was a very fitting way to end the story. It would be nice if you come back to the characters sometime in the future and do an update as you spoke of….🤤 Once again you broke the record stars 30 now……

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Shortymcc AKA Lynn

notbreckenridgenotbreckenridgeabout 1 year agoAuthor

Shortymac,

Thank you for your interest. I can't believe you powered through that many chapters so quickly. Absolute Mad Lad. That enthusiasm means so much though. I most definitely intend to do more. We'll get there. Thanks again.

FukkmeFukkme11 months ago

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Absolutely phenomenal. I started reading this series for some sexual release mixed with a bit of fantasy. I stayed for the fantasy.

Great work, thank you for sharing this world with us. I look forward to exploring this world further through your writings. In the meantime I´ll read your other materials. (: - I really hope that you will become a published writer and will happily support you in this endeavour.

Look forward to have you on my shelves. (;

EncntctEncntct8 months ago

Just brilliant, you’ve got real talent and thank you for sharing it with us. It’s rare to find a gem like this, bravo

DommeCatDommeCat8 months ago

As much as I love happy endings, this bittersweet ending seems perfect for the story. It feels more like a real experience. I look forward to more of your works, especially in this world. Five stars.

pho3niliapho3nilia4 months ago

Thank you for concluding the story, and thank you for the time you spent making this masterpiece

Zramm3DZramm3D3 months ago

great story I love the characters and the world you created and you inspired me a little in some of my work. I would love to see more world development the mundane elves , the religions and the various sects of she-elves are fascinating

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