All Comments on 'Captured Ch. 02'

Awww! It's such a bummer you won't keep going, since this is super great!

But i support your decision not to keep writing, even if it kills me slowly.

And if you change your mind to keep writing more chapters,

I TOTALLY support that too.

Some people would say you would be too cruel not to conclude this, not me though, because I know one day!

Oh please don't end here, loving this story and would love another chapter to wrap it up!

I can’t wait to find out what happens next. The imagery is great, and the plot has a lot of potential. It depends on where he goes from here.

1I demand a continuation! And by demand I mean pretty please!!!!

Please continue this story. It's so enthralling and I want to know more!!

Ok please finish this! I know it's not your genre, but you've captivated a few of us!!!

I’ll add ch.3 on my to-do list ;) Thanks for the nice feedback.

I hope you decide to continue this! It’s really good! I like the confidence and grace that the demon possesses. And it would be fun to see how they interact with each other now that she belongs to the demon. I hope chapter 3 makes it to the top of your list ;)

-Innocent Venus

Our of your genre or not, I hope you continue and complete this one.

All smiles.

I'm only a tiny bit devastated you don't want to continue. Everything about it so far has been perfect and is exactly what I've been trying to find to read. I'll definitely keep checking back for any other stories you'll post though!

Absolutely enthralled! The rarest of the rare an erotic tale with captivating plot. Seriously I’m not being sarcastic, you have talent, it was obvious from the first chapter.

Looking forward to reading more, thank you for sharing.

Tess (UK)