by davidwriter
Love your storyline and tight editing. A great read - now for next chapter. Xoxoxoxoxo Annette
Love this story! The beach scene was really good because it really captured what it's like to have someone touch you in that sensual massage way. Also I liked the twist with the 2 guys! I think it was really cool that you had guy/girl guy/guy and girl/girl all in one story. I also think it's really hot watching two guys make out!!!
Great job
-remie
What a selfish chick! take some lovin and give nothing back. She better make it up to her big time.
I love everything about this story except the title. I love women and I love fucking them. Sometimes I meet one who acts like a slut, but that is a word I never use. I let a woman know that I respect her and, like Anne suggested to Jem, I get more as a result. Also, I feel better about the woman I am with and I feel better about myself if I treat her with respect.
Nookiehunter
Some more scenarios
Nude scene in a play
Posing as a Nude model in an Art class
Entering a Quiz contest where they have to strip an article of clothing for each wrong answer
Keep up the great job
Love the story so Far, Please give us more embarressing situations where Anne has conflicts with what is going on
If I want to read about guys giving blow jobs, then I would read the Gay Male stories in that category.
And I really liked the first chapter when she did the car show & was embarassed & titilated could you please put her back in the car show wearing a skimpy bikini.
Still the wearing a g-string to work is great & so is the topless beach stuff.
But lets get back to the car show please?
I'm enjoying these stories so far very much and hope you continue them, but PLEASE, don't put any guy-guy action in the story, I can't even read that shit!
I too hope we can see more of these characters. Good writing, sexy, nice pacing. Good job.
Wounderfull buildupp! You make good use of the girls pshycology... I liked it, made me feel horny long before the sex scenes.
Would be wounderfull if you could read my first story and give me some comments, if its accepted. Maybe I could learn some from a master.
My mail is notforperm@hotmail.com, by the way.
*Kisses*
Nina
This has been a great read so far. I like that Anne is vulnerable to certain feelings but still remains strong. I loved the dress being kicked to the jerk's feet! Can't wait to see where this goes!