All Comments on 'Car Show Slut Ch. 14'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Another Great Story

You continue to amaze me with these stories. Please keep it up - and if you I will too!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Where is chap 13

So David, is 13 just not Anne's lucky number???

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Hanging out

Have loved this story thus far, and am waiting breathlessly for the next installment, well almost breathless I have to tell my partner every few days that "yes i've checked, and no he hasn't written a new one"

Looking forward to the next installment

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
waiting for more

i am waiting for more. please never stop writing this series. i wish i were Anne. hmmm sadly i am a male though. had i been a fem i would have been Anne.

DocCISDocCISalmost 17 years ago
davidwriter still working!

Just an update since there's been at least a 2 month gap in this series, hehehe...

Corresponded with davidwriter as he's helping me out with my first story. He is definitely working on updates! He wants to get an update or two on his other stories before putting in another installment of CSS but he IS working on it.

As to the missing Chapter 13...that was just a mistake on his part as originally the business trip and rendezvous with Wendy/Roger were two chapters that were merged into one.

Figured I'd give an update since he hasn't replied hehehe...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Fantastic Series

This is a brilliantly sexual and erotic series of stories. Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
WOW

I am a female and I loved your stories. You really know how to write women. Wishing I was Anne and got me obsessing about sex almost as much as her. I am so totally wet - anxiously awaiting more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
It has beeen way tooo long since you updated this

Please update

Update

Update I plead

My pum pum pleads.

why is there a break in sequence 12 - 14 but o 13?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
nice

OK, I liked the story, but.... something about a male telling a females perspective always seems like it's what a male THINKS a female would be thinking. I just don't believe you're really in "her" head. Would a real female think and act and talk like that????

style_cafestyle_cafeabout 16 years ago
Simply sensational!!

This is one of the hottest stories I`ve ever had the pleasure to read. The story flows well from chapter to chapter,with the characters being gradually introduced. With each new character I find myself wondering where they`ll appear next.!!!

Thanks so much for a great read.

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSalmost 13 years ago

Lol I saw that coming from the first thought of going downstairs. Although she is lucky he wasn't a cop that would be even worse.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
bravo

loved all the chapters. the ones with sarah tempting her to do lued things.

huntsman29huntsman29over 6 years ago
Good series.

I've enjoyed all of these so far. Writer seems to get writing from a woman's perspective, though I would say this chapter ended very predictably. Honestly, did anyone apart from Anne not see that coming?

AnnetteBishopAnnetteBishopabout 6 years ago
Nice twist

Great mix of business and pleasure. Wow xoxoxoxox Annette

WoodencavWoodencavabout 2 years ago

Oh so funny Mr Jones!!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

WoodencavWoodencavabout 2 years ago

What happened to chapter 13???

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What can I say, other than I am really just your average warm-hearted nice guy. I do have an active imagination, and sometimes stories spring from it - some of which are on here. I think the old cliche 'sex is all in the mind' has a literal truth to it (otherwise these chat ro...

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