All Comments on 'Car Trouble'

Love to masturbate to a good story

That is one hot story for a first timer .Great Job and Thank you for a fun read .

Very Nice story.. its unbelievable what happens when you set aside the BS and just let things flow..

Beautiful story of love. All fathers and daughters should experience such uninhabited sex.

The story is fine but contains some serious errors in word tense. Take "grinded" which a grade school kid probably knows should be "ground" or another word of similar intent.

This is an absolutely fantastic story! Kudos.

Thank you for your comment and I will work harder on word tense. It's probably my biggest weakness.

Thanks for the other feedback everyone. The reception so far has been amazing.

Wow, great story. Makes me wish I had a daughter!!

That was a great story. It caused an involuntary body reaction while reading. Looks like your daughter turned us both on. Thanks

So the wife cheated because of the husband..so why is he mad at her? Your driving in. North or south Carolina the end of May..it is not cold and a blanket is more then enough, even naked...really walking in a rural area with trees during a lightning storm...he knows how to fix cars yet raises the hood and says nope can't do it ..like a page of mistakes then quick sex...

Love it. This needs another chapter.

I need more stars

I like the concept and the characters, but there were a few mistakes that took me 'out' of the story. The setup was good, but could have been better. The cold could have been a blizzard of snow. The heater in the car failing as the battery died. If their peril was heightened, the story would have been more believable. Good effort and I hope my comments help with your future output.

Thanks for the comments. To be fair, the weather can turn rather cool in these parts during and after a storm and, combined with the wetness and maybe a tad bit of suspension of belief for story plot, I don't find it difficult to believe they would be shivering as they waited out a storm in a drafty barn.

To the hyper-critical Anonymous comment, I am sorry you didn't enjoy my story. I can only add that to your other criticisms, I don't find them remotely difficult to believe because I've lived variations of those.

Again, thank you for any comment either positive, negative, or just constructive. This is a side hobby of mine so I don't expect perfection, but I am happy that the majority of the reviews have been so positive.

Good story, well done. As you yourself have commented elsewhere some proof reading before submitting would add polish to the story/

Great story. Been there, done that. Despite the fact that i am now married with two teen age boys, Dad and i still get together when possible. The highlight of my summer occurs every June when Robert takes the boys fishing for a week ang i go to visit my parents. EP

Enjoyed Your Story So Much

That I Remembered My First

Time With My GF, When She Was

Driving My Car For The First Time

And She Got Off The Tracks On The

Roadway, and My Car Slid Into A

Shallow Lake As We Both Climbed Out Of

The Front Windows And Waited For Help

To Arrive, As It Was Snowing Outside.

Perfection.

This was very well done. The pace and description was spot.

All good loved it chapter 2?

Looking forward to the next chapters from both your great stories.

I'm truly hoping for a second chapter. I want to know if Victoria makes a commitment to her daddy/lover. Is she in love with him? Was she on birth control?

Great story. Well paced and incredibly hot!

Good story and great descriptions of the sex. 5 stars.

Excellent story telling…Five stars ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️❤️

Awesome

Great, thank you