- Romance
- Caramel Eyes
- Page 7
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"You're not working now, are you, mom?" Denise poked her head in, perplexed.
"Baby, why didn't you tell me about Caleb showing up at your apartment again last week?" Leela deflected.
"Oh," Denise smiled. "I guess... he's not worth mentioning anymore." She stared soulfully at Mark. "Do you want to do something after this, or just go home?" she asked. He moved to leave the office with her, lacing his fingers through hers while looking back at Leela.
"Maybe we can take a walk by the pier?"
***END***
- COMMENTS
ShelbyNoone26 days agoWell written story that acknowledges the struggles of those that are discriminated against by a majority society. 5 stars.
Flamethrow3 months agoExcellent explanation of the racial issues indigenous and coloured people sadly still face far too often, as good background to a beautiful love story
Anonymousabout 1 year agoI've read four of your stories now and have rated them all five stars. However, please get an editor. It's jarring to run across something like the wrong cases pronoun as the object of a preposition or some similar error. It distracts from the flow of the story and you are much too good a writer to have that happen.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoMy only gripe is that for the life of me, I can't figure out where there's a pier near Leela's -- One of the finest restaurants in the GTA.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoHahaha... laughing at the comment below mine... "pull our the race card." You mean actually talking about black and brown people's lived experiences? I love how this author incorporates race and social issues into devloping characters and a story. 5 from me.
