by penasweapon
It started with me trying to figure out who these people are and what going on... then it just stopped...
To submit this story on 02/14/13 and then write other stories up until 10/17/15 and not finish this one shows he doesn't deserve to have anyone praise his work. I'm moving on to another author. This one doesn't deserve any consideration whatsoever.
You can't end a story like this.....NO THANKS.........LAROC OF AGES
I hate when authors feel they have to tease us, to keep coming back for more.
You don't have to do that.
Ending abruptly like this only makes us (i.e.mad) we only have a half chapter.
Obviously it's my O.C.D.(honest; diagnosed and everything), But I hate things unfinished.
Please, have mercy and don't leave us hanging for too long.
P.s. And next time please make it a complete chapter.
Thank you
Where and when is part two coming.
By the way I had fantasies like that about my cousins.