by amasterfound
There's nothing the fuck wrong with euphemisms for pussy! They avoid redundancy, for one thing. As for the story being "goofy" and "rough", that's a matter of subjective taste. You're entitled to your opinions, but I don't happen to share them. This is a hot BDSM tale, plain and simple. She wanted to be kept in line, and she was. Loved it, baby!
You have a talent for writing, and other things I'm sure, hehehe. Please keep churning out these stories.
Mistress i enjoy your stories soooo much. WOW it was so HOT! :D looking forward to more
Ergh, this was cheesy, silly, poorly written and lacked detail. It just made me cringe all the way through and sometimes laugh. The author has clearly never been in a D/s relationship...or possibly ever met a woman?