All Comments on 'Caresse's Awakening Ch. 01'

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SEVERUSMAXSEVERUSMAXabout 19 years ago
Oh, shut the hell up!

There's nothing the fuck wrong with euphemisms for pussy! They avoid redundancy, for one thing. As for the story being "goofy" and "rough", that's a matter of subjective taste. You're entitled to your opinions, but I don't happen to share them. This is a hot BDSM tale, plain and simple. She wanted to be kept in line, and she was. Loved it, baby!

msboy8msboy8almost 19 years ago
Great Story

You have a talent for writing, and other things I'm sure, hehehe. Please keep churning out these stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Another Hot one!!!!

Mistress i enjoy your stories soooo much. WOW it was so HOT! :D looking forward to more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Ergh

Ergh, this was cheesy, silly, poorly written and lacked detail. It just made me cringe all the way through and sometimes laugh. The author has clearly never been in a D/s relationship...or possibly ever met a woman?

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