by emmaxin
Love the unexpected twist on relationship with Benjamin.
And it's hilarious that Catherine is packing a pistol under her skirts - "Good, let them worry about their own safety for once." LOL!!!
Just think about what's happened to her in the story so far. Of course, she's packing ;)
I just ran across this series and am really liking it. As per a comment from earlier chapter, I also did not particularly care for Rafael's character initially, but stuck through it as I saw your kind reply to that comment. I am now in 'Rafa's" court and rooting for him. The one thing I would like to provide feedback on is that some of these chapters are very short and if you would perhaps consider longer posts in future.
Outstanding!
I have to say I love the inner monologue….“Any hope of de-escalation dies with these two idiots.”
This is a real pleasure to read, all of the drama!
Tess (uk)
Wholeheartedly agree with previous comment re brilliant inner monologue - I couldn't help but smile as I read it. 5 stars!