All Comments on 'Caring for Carrie Pt. 02'

by Djmac1031

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sirius23sirius23about 2 years ago

I like this a lot. They have a very loving relationship. I'll be sad if you don't write part 3 at least

Southpaw1430Southpaw1430about 2 years ago

Yep, at least a third chapter, maybe a fourth. Thanks.

redbaron172redbaron172about 2 years ago

Very good story line, probably has happened more than most think. Would enjoy a continuation...

DexdareDexdareabout 2 years ago

Please carry it on, very hot, loving story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

POV changes result primarily interrupting the flow of a story and breaking the reader out of it. 3rd person is your friend.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Amazing. So close to the Real Thing. If you insist my telling you, I'd have to kill ya!

Don't leave us hanging, this series is one of your best so far.

Why are we waiting....?

winterplayingwinterplayingabout 2 years ago

DEFINITELY both points of view are working here. I really like knowing what both parties are thinking. You write well--descriptive enough to feel like you are there and can get in on the action too! lol....I would love a 3rd chapter. I hope you feel up to it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

absolute madlad you did it, and you did it perfect. I really hate when the dad perving his daughter or when the daughter is overly slut. But you written it so well it so pure and beautiful. Please finish it, a proper closure for a proper written story.

GrandEagle53GrandEagle53about 2 years ago

Absolutely fantastic. Can't wait for a chapter 3.

WhisporWhisporabout 2 years ago

This story is amazing! Well done!

HardBenHardBenover 1 year ago

Super erotic and exciting story.

Brilliant descriptive writing. Just loving this little series.

AWESOME!

kitty_katie07kitty_katie07about 1 year ago

Again, weirdly sweet, but so good. Can't wait to read part 3.

DexdareDexdare11 months ago

Absolutely loved it. I thought the first part was excellent but the second even bettered that. Can't wait for the next part.

ToughSailorToughSailorabout 1 month ago

Absolutely a beautifully written piece of prose. Especially appreciate the almost total absence of any vulgar language . . . .

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Just a guy with a vivid imagination. I've always loved reading erotic stories, figured I'd try writing my own. You'll probably start noticing my particular kinks and recurring themes as my stories progress. Conversations welcomed, feel free to leave comments or send PMs....

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