All Comments on 'Caring for Carrie'

If you do eventually decide to continue please do this story is great the writing, story length, everything.

What a beautiful story. Thank you.

@ YaBoiBigChungus7: I'm not completely dismissing the idea of a sequel. But I've often promised follow ups to other stories then never got to them. So I didn't wanna do that here.

I may get to it eventually. I may not lol

This story is perfection.

Well written, sensual and within the possibility of a real family situation. I hope you decide to keep the story going and add in her girlfriend as a full participant.

Outstanding and I definitely want a Part 2.

Top marks. The story has all the components and more to leave a reader bursting for me. I myself had to put it down this morning but left it up so I wouldn't miss finishing it tonight. Something I never have done with a story on Literotica ever before. I greatly understand the effort involved in creating such a work. So if indeed it ends here, that will be okay. However, should the young lady heal, and return home for break or what have you to find daddy. Showing him how much more like her mother she's grown to be in her fantasies and kinks. maybe a few ideas from fans could inspire you or even a colaboration to whip up an even more tantalizing tale.

On a side note. The juxtaposition of this story vs the normal mom son stepmom narrative combined with the fact I'm a widow myself of a loss to cancer brought my attention to the story. Somehow an intertwined ghost spirit of mom tale could fuel the next chapters.

Truly beautiful story so well written and so believable

Hope to see a follow up to it one day and see where it goes had me hooked n turned on all the way thorough

Great story. Interesting battle between conflicting feelings. You handled it very well.

Next chapter please this is beautiful

Need a part two-so similar to my life and lost wife....

i wish there was a part 2!

This was such a well-written exploration of the compulsion to succumb to dark desire. I loved every word of it. I've tried reading several stories today but this is the first one that grabbed my attention and kept it until the end. Thank you!

I really enjoyed this story and the way it flowed so naturally. The perfect mix of possibility and believability. great job man. Keep writing and posting when you get the chance, I love your style. Probably because I have many of the same kinks, so keep the warm panty draw full😅😂

Absolutely AWESOME story.

Great writing and pure erotic bliss. Fantastic!

This was weirdly sweet. I almost don't want to read the next part haha

Great and pleasant story. Beautiful segue is defiantly you long suit . . . .

Wow. What a moving and passionate story. His grief was still palpable, and as he was remembering his lost love while with his daughter, it brought a tear to the eye. "Smut" has no business being this emotional. Well done. 5*