by flyingbluejay
very well written and the characters were well defined. I hope there's a chapter 2.
Very interesting characters, and near perfect pacing and buildup to the finale. Well Done! 5 Stars
actually spectacular. cannot wait to hear more from these characters
Loved your story and the sex was great. You left this one open so that more chapters could be added as this could develop into a real nice, hot love story. Gave this story a 5 and hoping to read more about these two potential lovers.
Great story, gave it a 5 with the feeling that you could expand the story into many more meaningful chapters with a good strap on fuck for Sophie would love the penetration and the hot love making from her new companion. Keep going with this one as Sophie is looking to be dominated by the sexy Gardner.
There must be some thick readers on this site.
Did you mean rode and not road? What about where and not wear?
Silly, stupid mistakes.
Not a bad story though.
Please continue this! This is my favorite story and it never fails to get me off.
Wow. I loved this. A long buildup to a hot, hot finish. Well written with strong characters.
I'm reading this now to catch up with the new chapter 3. Things to look forward to...
Spectacular! Goodness that was a well written and anticipated meeting between them. Bravo!
The entire unabridged novella of this story is now available on kindle :)
Nice mutual satisfaction..the way it should be..they bityneedit, but especially Sophie!
Thanks ..very satisfying for me too!