All Comments on 'Carjacked'

I almost blinked and missed the entire story it was that short. We need it to be longer and have more background for the characters, why did he get devolved? Was this her first time as a prostitute? What problems does her mother have?

The story was good and I liked it but far too short.

This is a great start! Let's hear more :)

too short, too abrupt. The story could use a little more description, feeling, or emotion. Good start, nonetheless.

Like a Sofia Marmeladova. Sad, glad it had a happy ending.

Good begining, but where 's the rest?