All Comments on 'Carl Won't Stop Talking'

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ByrdMan1960ByrdMan1960over 3 years ago

Beautiful story. Thank You!!!

mammoetmammoetover 3 years ago
Loved it

needs another chapter

b33nb33nover 3 years agoAuthor

Thank *you*!

edfromgabesedfromgabesover 3 years ago
So Hot!

Really enjoyed this story. It has been a giant fantasy of mine to be with a couple, and I’m still rock hard thinking about those three...

RoyWilliamsRoyWilliamsover 3 years ago
Awesome tale!

Great storyline and action. 5stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
I think you meant "reek"

You've used the word "wreak" a couple of times, but I think you mean "reek".

n8Romanticn8Romanticover 3 years ago

Engaging story! Reading this, I gave in to my imagination and was Marco, Felicia, and Carl.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great Five Star Story!! I was hard and puckering every step of the way thinking about this!!

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanover 2 years ago

excellent. like that she kind of runs the show but no one is forced, they all want it.

grenefiregrenefirealmost 2 years ago

This needs a part 2! It was so hot

b33nb33nalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you, everyone, for your feedback. As for part two, I'm working on a couple of ideas that include all three of our friends at "summer camp". I don't write frequently, so thank you for your patience. Stay tuned!

cumchucker69cumchucker69over 1 year ago

This needs a part 2

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I regret that I don't publish my stories more often. I really enjoy writing because I know, thanks to your feedback, that people like reading my stories. My stories are also a way of living (or reliving) my fantasies.