All Comments on 'Carl's Special Holiday'

Then you FUCKED it up with that gay/bi shit.

Very, very not-interested, quite vomitus actually.

1* only I'm afraid.

I hope you have a follow up planned with the neighbors.

I especially loved that everyone was bisexual in the story. I don't really get where it all find for women to be bi and not guys.

I love a 'loving' family! Would love to read some more, keep writing!!

I love this story, its very hot. I like the family involvement, its well written. I like how you added the Father/Son element most of the time this is left out, every other combo is done but rarely this. Keep up the great work. Can't wait for the next chapter. Aloha!

I liked the story....the father/son thing didn't bother me at all.....if it bothers others....that's their problem.....its your story....write it the way you want to....

This is a story, ONLY a story.

Every story, by every author starts with the phrase; What if ...

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11/28/16 By: Anonymous

Then you FUCKED it up with that gay/bi shit.

Very, very not-interested, quite vomitus actually.

1* only I'm afraid.

Hope you have a follow up with this storyline loved it

All.

Loved it. There are not enough stories that explore bi sex between ALL family members. Carl and John should trade butt fucks before the Harrison's come over. Then Carl should be sandwiched between the Harrison's while his dad takes Cathy.

for me, it seems incomplete - I would call this story, "Act One".

loved your story. loved the bi-sexual element too. now let's see carl fuck his sister. let's see carl and dad both fuck her at the same time.

That was so hot. I hope this story continues for many more sequences

This story had me Cummin in my tight pussy onto my thong. I masturbated all the way with a vibrator buried deep inside me.

absolutely loved it!!! would love to read sequel to this one

Loved this story. I like how you went into such depth. Definitely write another.

I love where this story is going, and will be reading Carl's Special New Years next. I liked the entire story, bi-sexual parts as well. I also liked the rules about no pain, or humiliation (except for one time?). OK, you really got me curious. This is definately a 5***** story.

Wow! Great read! I too liked the bisexual part. Can't wait for the next round with the Harrison's. I too would like another round with Dad and anal.

great story. love all the sex between everyone. well done!!!

But the story was way too short...... Unless you're going to put out a new chapter on a regular basis.... :)

This was just a sex story.

Awesome story though it was a bit short and I don't like the father and son part, but you need a follow up!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice story but it was too short continue with more and bring the Harrisons in the mix!

That was poorly written and pathetic, why is most of your garbage like that.

Just average and too damn short 3 stars