All Comments on 'Carmen and Her Daddy Ch. 03'

chapters are you going to write untill he fucks her and pops her cherry? a slow build up is great but by the third chapter there should be some fucking going on.

I'm not sure how many chapters. I like my stories my way, you like them your way. I appreciate you reading and commenting. I really like the feedback!

Great build up and love your writing style. Look forward to the next chapter!

great build up but now we need fucking

I personally like the story, how you're breaking up the chapters, and that it's not going too fast.

Just make sure you WRITE the chapters fast so we don't have wait too long between them! :)

yes we need fucking now. in her pussy and a cream pie

Please continue.

Omg I played with myself while reading this mmmmm

plz... i cant take it....plz

this is so good. I NEED More!

didn't you continue with the story?

So beautifully wrapped trend can't wait for more.