All Comments on 'Carnal Knowledge Ch. 15-16'

For months now poor Eliza's fate has been undetermined after getting kinapped by the wicked George! Please tell us if you're still around!

I have recently found you on this site, and I instantly fell in love with the story. I binged read all the chapters in 2 days, and I was so looking forward to the ending. Please let all your admirers know what has interrupted this beautiful story and left it with so many loose ends. Please, please, please.

Does anyone know of another good series that takes place around the same time period?

Really enjoying your story - your character development, your plot twists, and, of course, the young lady's "education". Please continue the series. :)

Please finish - it's a lovely story.

Please, please do.

I would love to continue reading about the events of your well thought out story.

Please! It is torture waiting... Please!

It's going to be a year soon! Just tell us if your still in the works or what!!

Yes, I am still here, still trying to get this damn thing finished. I'm sorry it's taking forever, I truly am. I write in secret, plus work two jobs, and I am a terrible procrastinator. If I had known how long it was going to take me I wouldn't have started posting until it was completed. Sorry!

Please write Emmeline!! Loved your work! Eagerly waiting. Please!

I'm glad to know you are still working on your story!

If I understand correctly, what appears to have happened or has been imagined by others, or suggested obliquely by you, Eliza was pregnant/'up the duff' in the chapters dated 03/23/16, which is rather more than 9 months ago.

Has she given birth or been forced through unthinking brutality into a miscarriage? Your many fans need to know.

All that apart, this story is my absolute favourite.

Genuinely, and perhaps despite appearances, I am quite sensitive to what you say you are experiencing. I've been there too, and it wasn't all that enjoyable.

Please be assured that I shall continue checking regularly whether there is/are further chapters to view/enjoy in this most compelling story.

With my kindest regards,

Gravitate

Loved this yarn!

Do you have any other stories in the "pipeline"?

Finish the story for god's sake

Well this is the story that has FINALLY made me want to become a member here.... Just so I can save it and revisit regularly. Well done!! Absolutely LOVING it!!! And can't wait to see how it all resolves itself as soon as you're able :D As you rightly pointed out... It's free so.... Lol whenever you're able! But that won't stop me eagerly checking back on a regular basis in hopes hahahaha!

Prediction: George is going to be ripped to shreds shortly. And I'm gonna enjoy every damn second.

fantastic stuff, enjoying reading this with my wife. I've never read anything so erotic and sensitive.

Emmeline... I chanced upon your story, and I've enjoyed every single word of your writing. Your creativity and language are superlative. You must certainly finish the story as it would be a grave injustice to your readers as well as to the story itself to let it lie deserted.

And once finished, please publish it so the whole world can grab a copy!

Please please please please please! I must know what happens.

Dear Emmeline,

We are nearly in tears with frustration! To leave it on a cliffhanger...too cruel, even for the Earl. Please post again soon. Perhaps a Valentine's Day installment? There is clearly so much love, and effort put into your work, and the result is magic. We are sighing with anticipation. Much love and good writing vibes to you!

Finish the story already

If you need more encouragement let me provide it. Your writing is very tight. The scenes, voice, characterization, dialogue and pacing are all done so well it's easy to fall into the story and become wrapped up in it. Not to mention the erotic scenes which are exceptionally written and very hot. I hope that you will finish it soon so that we can all enjoy it. If you aren't writing professionally already, you should be. (Not before you finish this though!! Lol)

Put something up even if it's just a page...something. Please. I've read this in it's entirety...AGAIN. It's almost been a year & you have fans who are STILL waiting. Please please please!

I promise I do read your requests. I have really struggled getting the end of the story finished for a lot of different reasons. I do have the next two chapters written and will try to get them posted. Thanks for reading :)

Love,

Emmeline

Please post them soon!!

You have written truly engrossing piece of art. Thank you and please continue I await the culmination of this masterpiece.

Can't wait for the next chapters!

PLEASE UPDATE THE STORY I NEEEED TO KNOW MORE! I'm so intrigued to see how the plot progresses! This is so unbelievably well written bc it really does sound like the era it's from! Btw I have cried a few times reading the series and that's a good thing so pLEAASE UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN

Such an intriguing tale. Your grasp of the rhythm is great. We're all waiting for the next chapters.....the rescue (again!) of our damsel, more amourous adventures, and a thrilling denouement all told in your particularly engaging style.

If you're not going to finish a story, don't bother starting one in the first place.

Emmeline, I absolutely love the story! Can't wait for more. Thank you for this.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

It's been a year, but I'm just glad you are still working on it.

I was so happy you wrote Eliza returning...and then you sprung George and Mrs. Biddleton back into the picture after Eliza and William reconciling? Oh... YOU!!

Suspenseful, tense and authentic. Can't say much more. 5

Not the story but the fact that there's no new chapters in ages

It's my first time reading an erotica and I just loved it so much 😍 please continue.

Forgot this was in my bookmarks and reread it. Enjoyed it both times ive read it

Absolutely rivetting...!