All Comments on 'Carnal Knowledge Ch. 15-16'

Absolutely rivetting...!

Forgot this was in my bookmarks and reread it. Enjoyed it both times ive read it

It's my first time reading an erotica and I just loved it so much 😍 please continue.

Not the story but the fact that there's no new chapters in ages

I was so happy you wrote Eliza returning...and then you sprung George and Mrs. Biddleton back into the picture after Eliza and William reconciling? Oh... YOU!!

Suspenseful, tense and authentic. Can't say much more. 5

It's been a year, but I'm just glad you are still working on it.

Emmeline, I absolutely love the story! Can't wait for more. Thank you for this.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

If you're not going to finish a story, don't bother starting one in the first place.

Such an intriguing tale. Your grasp of the rhythm is great. We're all waiting for the next chapters.....the rescue (again!) of our damsel, more amourous adventures, and a thrilling denouement all told in your particularly engaging style.

PLEASE UPDATE THE STORY I NEEEED TO KNOW MORE! I'm so intrigued to see how the plot progresses! This is so unbelievably well written bc it really does sound like the era it's from! Btw I have cried a few times reading the series and that's a good thing so pLEAASE UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN

Can't wait for the next chapters!

You have written truly engrossing piece of art. Thank you and please continue I await the culmination of this masterpiece.

Please post them soon!!

I promise I do read your requests. I have really struggled getting the end of the story finished for a lot of different reasons. I do have the next two chapters written and will try to get them posted. Thanks for reading :)

Love,

Emmeline

Put something up even if it's just a page...something. Please. I've read this in it's entirety...AGAIN. It's almost been a year & you have fans who are STILL waiting. Please please please!

If you need more encouragement let me provide it. Your writing is very tight. The scenes, voice, characterization, dialogue and pacing are all done so well it's easy to fall into the story and become wrapped up in it. Not to mention the erotic scenes which are exceptionally written and very hot. I hope that you will finish it soon so that we can all enjoy it. If you aren't writing professionally already, you should be. (Not before you finish this though!! Lol)

Finish the story already

Dear Emmeline,

We are nearly in tears with frustration! To leave it on a cliffhanger...too cruel, even for the Earl. Please post again soon. Perhaps a Valentine's Day installment? There is clearly so much love, and effort put into your work, and the result is magic. We are sighing with anticipation. Much love and good writing vibes to you!

Please please please please please! I must know what happens.

Emmeline... I chanced upon your story, and I've enjoyed every single word of your writing. Your creativity and language are superlative. You must certainly finish the story as it would be a grave injustice to your readers as well as to the story itself to let it lie deserted.

And once finished, please publish it so the whole world can grab a copy!

fantastic stuff, enjoying reading this with my wife. I've never read anything so erotic and sensitive.

Well this is the story that has FINALLY made me want to become a member here.... Just so I can save it and revisit regularly. Well done!! Absolutely LOVING it!!! And can't wait to see how it all resolves itself as soon as you're able :D As you rightly pointed out... It's free so.... Lol whenever you're able! But that won't stop me eagerly checking back on a regular basis in hopes hahahaha!

Prediction: George is going to be ripped to shreds shortly. And I'm gonna enjoy every damn second.

Finish the story for god's sake

Loved this yarn!

Do you have any other stories in the "pipeline"?

If I understand correctly, what appears to have happened or has been imagined by others, or suggested obliquely by you, Eliza was pregnant/'up the duff' in the chapters dated 03/23/16, which is rather more than 9 months ago.

Has she given birth or been forced through unthinking brutality into a miscarriage? Your many fans need to know.

All that apart, this story is my absolute favourite.

Genuinely, and perhaps despite appearances, I am quite sensitive to what you say you are experiencing. I've been there too, and it wasn't all that enjoyable.

Please be assured that I shall continue checking regularly whether there is/are further chapters to view/enjoy in this most compelling story.

With my kindest regards,

Gravitate

I'm glad to know you are still working on your story!

Please write Emmeline!! Loved your work! Eagerly waiting. Please!

Yes, I am still here, still trying to get this damn thing finished. I'm sorry it's taking forever, I truly am. I write in secret, plus work two jobs, and I am a terrible procrastinator. If I had known how long it was going to take me I wouldn't have started posting until it was completed. Sorry!

It's going to be a year soon! Just tell us if your still in the works or what!!

Please! It is torture waiting... Please!

I would love to continue reading about the events of your well thought out story.

Please, please do.

Please finish - it's a lovely story.

Really enjoying your story - your character development, your plot twists, and, of course, the young lady's "education". Please continue the series. :)

Does anyone know of another good series that takes place around the same time period?

I have recently found you on this site, and I instantly fell in love with the story. I binged read all the chapters in 2 days, and I was so looking forward to the ending. Please let all your admirers know what has interrupted this beautiful story and left it with so many loose ends. Please, please, please.

For months now poor Eliza's fate has been undetermined after getting kinapped by the wicked George! Please tell us if you're still around!

I'm dying to know what happens next!!! Please finish the story. Don't torture us like this.

Looking forward to reading more of this lovely story... hopefully soon!

You've got us enthralled

Emmeline, I understand how pesky life creates situations that make writing a challenge. Please post a comment or something, letting us know you're still out there, still intend to finish this story but are waiting for the muse and opportunity.

This is such a good story! Very erotic!

Wow, you are a very talented writer. Not just the erotica but the overall story was also great. Can't wait to read the rest of it. Please write soon!

Dear Emmeline,

I forgot to mention that I hardly ever comment. I've just made my account but I've been lurking on this site for 6 years now as an anon-user, and in all that time, I've only commented 5 times, this being the fifth (including my earlier comment). This story rivets people, just like Sacrifice, another multi-chapter story about a DomSub relationship, written by pandarus. Great stuff, really great. You've built yourself a fanbase, friend.

PS: More five star: 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Hi! Just checking up again.

We know that you're a busy person, as we all are, but this story NEEDS to be completed. I finished reading this series a few weeks ago and I must say, I can't help wanting to know what happens next. You're a great writer, but left us on a terrible cliffhanger. What comes next? How did George come back? What are Barlow and Cavendish planning? The suspense kills 💔

Hopefully you'll put up another chapter soon.

PS: I'd give this five stars again if I could, but apparently you can only rate once, so have this instead: 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Just lurking. Waiting to see if there are new chapters.

I've been lurking on Literotica for 16 years now. I've seen a lot of garbage around here, and I've read some very good stories too, but they are few and far in between. Yours is the first story that has compelled me to come out of lurking, do a slow emphatic clap, and post a comment. :)

This deserves to be published. You have an engrossing story, and your writing style flows. And yet the biggest strength of this story is your character development. Both leads, and even the supporting cast, are nuanced people.

I don't know what's happened in your life between March and October 2016. I respect a writer's right to privacy and space. However, please know that there are legions of us waiting with bated breath for you to continue this amazing story.

You are a talented author. Early await my of this tale.

Thankfully I discovered this series only recently, so have not had to endure the frustration of many. I've been through puh-lenty of that with the "Lena" saga, the "Rebellious Slave", "Egir's Captive" and so on and so forth. But one thing is true--those stories are always the best. The best. That is what gets all these readers in such a frenzy. We are at about the 6 month mark so I expect we will see another chapter from you soon. At least I hope. This rivals some of my favorite series, most definitely, so I congratulate you on that. Your story has depth, and yet, is extremely hot. Some of the stories like these have a lot of depth and plot twists that are entertaining, but not nearly enough sex (or long enough sex) to balance it out. People come to Literotica to be aroused, and you definitely do that. Exceptionally well. I only submit reviews for superior stories. Just can't say enough, except "keep writing". It is ok to have long breaks between chapters. Just don't throw in the towel. You are too good to quit. ;)

We know you have a very busy life but we'll love to have an update from you.

Love this story and can hardly wait for the next chaper.

Thanks

Maria

I loved the chapters, i hope you finish the remaining chapters soon! You are an awesone writer. This should be published!!

What a great story! By far the best one on the site. Can't wait for the next chapter, please publish soon!

It is a fabulously well written plot and story. Please publish a book and release the next few chapters. I know the pressure is intense you are always getting this question but any thoughts on when will you release the next chapter? I keep checking for an update.

By far the best piece I have ever read on this site! Be proud of your ability to tell a tale! Wonderful!! Seriously the best multi-chapter piece I've read! I can not wait to read the next chapters. Thank you for a delightful, rough, romantic, erotic, amazingly human story.

This is the best thing I have found on literotica. Period. Please don't leave me hanging forever. I sooo want to know what happens next.

I keep checking back to see if there's been another chapter released...I've been patiently waiting for months. Please continue with your story, it's so well written. I'm hooked!

I love this story. Please write more, I am dying to know what happens next.

Please DON'T be one more author with ANOTHER unfinished story!!

We're dying here!

My dear Emmeline,

Your gift and talents are astounding. My only regret is that your fans have to wait for the conclusion of this story.

Your newest fan,

lbj

These are well written, and I just found them yesterday. The cast of characters, the turn of events all of it works really well. As people say you should make a book. Definitely enjoy this and am happy to hear that the next chapter should be happening soon. Still though these chapters were published in March, I'm all bummed out from binge reading the chapters to know what happens next. I'm not the most patient person.

I really don't want her to lose the baby. So I hope that doesn't happen. I'm excited to see where the whole story goes. More please definitely!

I'm amused at everyone begging for another chapter. We really are baited with anticipation.

But you should definitely consider a book. Your writing style is lovely.

I've just read all the available chapters. Fantastic story. I can't wait for more!

I'm trying I promise! Hopefully not too much longer!!

Thanks for your extended patience! :D

Why have you not published the next chapter I am frantic!

Love this story! My favorite by far! Should be a published novel! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Please let nothing bad happen to her or the bad and please update soon

sex, love, family matters, society matters, scandal - all the makings of a great novel!

Please continue with this story! Its one of my favorites so far. Beautifully written.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

A little worried that we havnt heard from emmeline. Hope you will continue

Ohhhhh more more more oh please don't abandon this story!!

...that I'm also eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

Still waiting and waiting..even if this author decides to make a book and put it out at least give us details where to find it to finish the story!!

Ahhhh this was worth the wait omg

More!!!

I had given up hope you would finish . This is amazing .Please hurry.

Please hurrrrrry with the next chapter .... Awesome work you're doing

Omg I cannot wait for the next chapter!!!!

So glad you've added another chapter and it was worth the wait. I think you are one of the best writers on this site, and this story is a classic. You ought to publish, it beats 50 shades hands down. Much better quality writing and a more engaging & believeable story. Hanging out with bated breath waiting for the next instalment.

Just like dear Eliza, I simply can't get enough.

This is such a well written story. I just couldn't stop reading it until I came to the end.

I am anxiously waiting for the next chapter.

Emmilune you are a wonderful writer!

This is the perfect cross between historical romance and erotica. Exuct, but actually has a great story line.

If you ever decide to actually publish a book (or if you already have) I would gladly purchase it. I love your writing style.

Please tell us when the next one is.... I'm going to die waiting for it..... i hate waiting.... it's too good!

Hoping the author of this one DOES come back and finish..it's just way too good not to finish this!

I think my comment title sums up my feelings for this series succinctly enough. Like many, the first few chapters had a few elements that made me hate Rockdale but as the series has progressed, you've really developed his character in a way that redeems him to some extent.

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, if you have published anything else, anywhere else, please let us know! Your writing style is very engaging and enjoyable ☺

This story has such delicious characters and is fantastically well-written to boot. Please finish it! Preferably in the next week or so, so I don't go mad thinking about it.

I feel like I am constantly reading different stories on here but this undoubtedly top three best I've ever read. I just started and finished yesterday and I'm so excited for the next chapters!!! Just know that your story is amazing. I've been literally dreaming different endings up because I'm that obsessed.

Like many others I keep checking for updates every day......with bated breath!

Ahhhhhhhhhhh! So what happens next???? You're so mean to make us wait eons. 😋

I've been reading romantic sexy novels since I was 13, and Im 30yrs old now. My favorite authors are Lisa Kleypas, Brenda Joyce, Catherine Coulter, Judith Mcnaught etc.. they're the best selling authors and I would say you would be one of them someday!! You have such talent, it's brilliant! ! More power to you! Thank you

Naughty Girl from Manila

I keep checking every day for the next piece...please please please, add some more and don't give up writing..I was already crushed by the finale of the walking dead cliffhanger, don't send me over the edge with stopping here at this point. Lol.

Wow. Loved it this would make a great novel. Am dying for part 17. When will it be available. You left me hanging.

This could be a novel. I'd purchase it in a heartbeat. Good luck with your writing and please finish the story. I know they will wed, but I'd just like some closure.

I have long read free fiction and fan-fiction online. I have to say finding stories like yours is like finding polished gold in a large pile of rotting hay! This could be a good novel! I'm serious! The plot is entertaining, the character build up is beautiful and I cannot wait for the rest of it. I spent all night reading this!

Just found this story last night and stayed up most of the night reading it. The writing is so good. The wit is cool and logical and unforced, the emotionality is warm and satisfying, and the sex is smoldering with brilliant and intensely hot (and constant) eruptions. I really enjoy this couple together, their banter and sparring and the way there's always warmth with the heat and vice versa. Please, please post more as soon as you can!

I found this a month ago and can't wait for the next chapters. Is their a way to be informed when a new chapter come on line?

I absolutely love the story!! Please keep going!!!!

Am so excited to see a new chapter here! Discovering newly posted chapters for good stories such as this one is better than Xmas! Have not read this chapter yet but just wanted to voice my appreciation for keeping this story going. You rock, Emmeline!

Good story, good characters, very sexy. I think you can get a book deal. The only thing I would advise is to play up the main characters and make them more likable or charismatic. Good dialogue. I hope you finish the story.

I am actually wishing this story was in novel form!! There's never enough to keep reading! Was so happy to finally see more of it posted!

I don't think I can wait six months for the next chapter. Your killing me!! I found this story yesterday afternoon and just couldn't put it down. I don't usually read Historical Romanace/Erotica but I have a couple that I love. Your story is now added to that list.Biker, Rockstar, Paranormal, those are my usual. I would buy this if it was available on Amazon to add to my Kindle

Please have mercy and try go get us the next chapter. You are a very good writer.

You can't leave it there! More please.