All Comments on 'Carnal Needs of the Flesh Ch. 01'

Your first story not containing Amanda or yourself was interesting, very well written. I could feel Samantha's conflicting emotions the whole way through. Stangely I found it a more interesting read then hot like your other stories/chapters but look forward to see where you take it.

Dam, "Carnal Needs" takes you on rollercoaster of a ride. You get a little bit of everything sex, disgust, humor, sadness, and more. That to me is effective storytelling. Can't wait to see where this new series leads.

Depravity much? Try this on for size: "You suck cock better than your mother." Lets swim the warm waters of carnal needs of the flesh. You'll come to love it.

It's fun to watch an author grow in artistry and ability, and this is a great leap forward in sheer carnality. This is the kind of dirty that doesn't wash off. Bravo!

Carnal Needs was fairly predictable until the big reveal. I don't want to give it away, but shit hit the fan! The ending was a little fucked up, but I don't read incest stories for cookie cutter romance. I like fucked up! made me sad and hard at the same time when Samantha called for her mommy!

I really liked this story after the first read, then read the Sinful Needs of the Flesh series that preceded this, then returned and read "Carnal Needs" again. I must say, it gave even more depth to Sami, making a great story even greater.

I was looking forward to a story with Samantha for a little while now.

Albeit, I thought her cousin was going to make a comeback!