by XXNoraJeanXX
First paragraph she and hubby have a great sex life--Paragraph two only 2 times per week--Meanwhile hard to read with paragraphs much too long
I enjoy following the stream of carnal fantasies and visions of another person while they are giving themselves pleasure. Writing a stream of ones own thoughts is difficult but when done well, as in this story, is more erotic than watching a movie because you are deep inside the person's body and soul, where the seed of eroticism is spawned. Well done. Please write more.
We need more stories like this. Stories that explore the inner most secret of our fantasies, those that come out only at a time that we are involved in self pleasuring and stories that could only be shared under the assurance that our identity could never be revealed.
I would like a forum like this.
Thank you.