All Comments on 'Carnival Creatures'

Phenomenal writing. Nice job

Intense, erotic, fun tale - so well crafted. Would enjoy getting to know the two lovers. Any chance? If not, will certainly look for more of your stories.

I love the way you describe things so vividly. Great job.

Now that's what I call writing! Superb, poetic, wonderfully sexy.

Super writing: imaginative, evocative, and so, so erotic. Brilliant work, and thanks for sharing it.

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