All Comments on 'Carnival of Delights Pt. 01: Caught'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
wicked!

I love it...please continue with more...

JcitrelliJcitrelliover 2 years ago

This was an incredibly great start to a story. Looking forward to more.

TNsourdoughTNsourdoughover 2 years ago

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Can't wait to read about Ezra!!

PlaytimeXXXPlaytimeXXXover 1 year ago

so far so good but carry on.... nice build up and great sense of reluctance from the boys

A55eaterA55eater12 months ago

Hot for a story that is basically a preview.

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Hello, and welcome to my profile. I believe erotica should bring us to a realm with unlimited possibilities, scenarios and characters. I'm a fetish friendly writer who just enjoys to write some of my biggest kinks. I hope you can let yourself sink into some of my scenarios and...

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