All Comments on 'Carol Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great Story!!!

The chapters keep getting hotter and hotter. Please keep it going as I can't wait to see how Carol continues.

WatcherRobWatcherRobover 7 years ago
Anal ruined the story

The title says it all . The story was going nicely until it went anal!

johnstang2johnstang2over 7 years ago
I agree with WatcherRob

I hate anal play and to be honest it is no picnic for women too. It literally hurts like hell the entire time. You can seriously damage someone doing anal.

Besides I think it would have been hotter if she did turn up pregnant. To create new life in the woman you lusted after for a long time would simply extremely hot. I find impregnation stories extremely hot for this reason. The only impregnation type story I do not find hot is when one of the partners is forced into performing the act (rape). However, depending how the aftermath is handled, it could be an interesting read but not an erotic read. To me this is an erotic site.

What can the father do. If he even touches Jon then he could literally go to jail for a very long time. Besides he treats his family like possessions rather than his family. Possessions you can discard - family you can't therefore its important to treat them right and with respect.

I truly believe if Jon treat Carol right then her kids will defend Jon. All except for maybe Mark, Jon's best friend. He probably would try to beat him up before he can forgive him.

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