by mlyn
This is a really good beginning to a story of the kind I really like. Please continue! (And I second the tattooing suggestion.)
Absolutely loved this story and can not wait for much more!!!!! i LOVE the idea of a tattoo... but not all over. she needs to be marked by Him (not necessarily Him doing the tattoo, but the design and placement by him). That is part of the "secret" life they live. A special tattoo or marking that means something significant to Him...and her as well. As a sub myself, it is very special to be marked by Him...where no one else can see it unless He wants them too. i have two, one small one on my breast and one very large one starting high on my hip trailing half way down my thigh. It is amazing. Just the thoughts of a subbie. Thank You for Your story and please, please write more!!!
would love More-More-More of Max and Carol...love the set up and want to see more of it play out.
I just came across this story and enjoyed very much reading it. However, this can be just the first chapter of a much longer narrative. Please continue!
I dream of my own Carole being transformed. Hair in a flattop, big nose- and nipple rings, permamently installed. Stretched earlobes and fully tattooed arms and body in bright colors.
Of course the tattooing of permanent make up, eyebrows, eye liner and shadow and thick bright red lips.
That would complete her humiliatiom nicely !
Oh yes, of course tattooing ! That's is a very permanent humiliating decoration.
Don't forget to tattoo her pussy. Not just some writing but with nice colorful flowers maybe.
Then I think stretching her earlobes will be nice, a nice big ring through her septum too, permanently fastened ? And maybe tattooed eyebrows, eyeshadow, eyeliner and lip-red ? Outlined in black. Or make her lips thicker... Plenty of work can be done yet on Carol.
Keep writing though !