All Comments on 'Carol Learns About Spanking'

Awesome! So glad I stopped by! ;)

Loved it to bits. More please!!

I was doing a story search and found Jackie's bitches first, then this. I like these type of stories with discipline games, with making deals about who gets spanked, and how much, who can take more. On the side bar , disciplinarian chap 1 is listed as a similar story and I already ready them. This story is not as well written or believable as truthandlove's stories, but it is entertaining.

It would be good more details about each spanking session or sex session but the story of this group is very hot.y

My only complaint is that several times you would talk about something hot that was about to happen... and then jump ahead of it and move on without any description. A lot of the fun of erotica, for me, is reading detailed descriptions of sexual acts and the pleasure that is received by both parties... if you say Joy is about to eat Carol out, then damn it I want to read about that, and the pleasure she's getting from it! If you tell me her uncle is gonna spank her 100 times, i want at least a little more detail, and I want to know how Carol is feeling and how excited she is as it is happening Just my opinion. Still a very hot story!

Interesting scenario, but the execution of the punishment and or humiliation is at the crux of this story, but is regularly absent.

Some clarification is needed. Is it Joy or Jill. Some times a little confusing, who is getting or giving what. More clarification about Linda's parents and Carol's parents is needed. Second round of editing and proof reading. Tie this into Carol going to the Spanking Club at the hotel.