All Comments on 'Caroline's Comeuppance - Intro'

Just several disjointed paragraphs that probably lead somewhere in your mind because you have the full story but there is nothing here to make me interested enough to come back for the rest.

Anonymous does have a certain point. This prequel is too sparse of needed information to stand on it's own. And I suspect will not support the rest of the story to follow.

However, that is no reason to just give up. There are a couple of intriguing clues to what might follow, enough for me to want to at least try to read a couple of more chapters. Then, when I have enough info to make a decision for myself, whether or not to continue.

I would suggest to the author, that they consider the storyboard again and reconsider what info the readers consider important in a Intro/Prequel and rewrite to entice waffling readers to at least try the next couple of chapters, when they post.