Carol's Patch Job Ch. 05

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"Of course you realize that you will never have him again or grow old with him."

Janice was confused, hadn't Carol arranged all this, to get her parents back together? Janice's eyes still followed Jim.

He walked back to a table and a younger woman got up to greet him. Janice was shocked to see, that it was her old therapist, Michelle Ward. Why, she was only thirty-five or six and Jim was six or seven years older. Michelle took one of the glasses from Jim and gave him a short but passionate kiss on the lips. Jim reached down with his free hand and gently placed it over her belly. She was obviously, at least four months pregnant. Jim and Michelle exchanged looks full of love.

Janice looked at Carol with puzzlement and fury on her face. "What the hell is going on?"

"It has been very hard on me, keeping those two or should I say three a secret. But Steve and Lisa, have been a big help too. Both you and Daddy got in the habit of using us to relay messages. We just encouraged the practice."

"You remember Michelle, or Shelly as she likes to be called, don't you? She became quite intrigued with Daddy, after all your sessions together. But she would never have done anything. I don't know, if you ever noticed but she was the author, of two of those books I bought so long ago, about pleasing your man."

"I met with her myself, after your separation. I needed a recommendation for a therapist for Daddy. It was nothing too serious but he was so hurt and confused. Especially when he found out, about your adultery. Don't look so shocked. Don't you think, that with your sudden separation, that he would wonder. We told you, that we would lie by omission but if he ever asked. Well he did wonder and he did ask.

When I met Michelle, I saw the look of interest in her eyes. Remember how I told you, I would find a new wife for Daddy? You left him with a broken heart, it was my job to patch it. She was young, pretty, wealthy and she had written such marvelous books. I immediately classified her as a prospect. So I resolved to become her friend in order to get her to meet Daddy. I also had Uncle Ben's connivance in the matter. Later she told me, she had made the same decision at the same time. She had always wanted to meet the subject of both Uncle Ben's and your stories."

"She found a therapist in the same building, so she could accidentally meet him, from time to time."

"Well she obviously liked what she saw and she went after him, like a wolf going after a lamb. He had no chance. They were married in May, and it was a lovely wedding. Didn't you get your invitation? Oh, I've got it right here in my purse, better late than never. You sent Daddy such a lovely letter declining, and I've got that here too. You really should read both."

"So now I'm going to be a big sister again, and Lisa is even more thrilled. I think she wants to be in the delivery room and I think Michelle is going to let her. She's calling it a family bonding experience."

"I love you Mother but like I said, I had to balance the books for Daddy. You cheated on him, took him for granted and were flirting with everyman in sight, when you started your new job. You forgot about him, you forgot about us, again!"

"Your family, all of us even Daddy, still love you Momma."

Janice barely heard Carol's last statement. She was locked in misery, she guessed Scrooge really hadn't learned his or her lesson. Her beautiful, elegant condo was now becoming that small, dingy, sour apartment she had imagined years ago. She could see the old harridan cackling away on her ratty old couch. Dressed in old finery. She was so.......

Carol was pulling on her hands. "Momma, Momma we love you. You will never be alone!"

The End

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Author's Rants;

It wasn't supposed to be like this. It was supposed to be your standard. Wife gets conned into cheating, husband finds out, wife crawls back, they make kissy face and the end. I swear it was radiation from my new desk lamp, that was changing my keystrokes. Janice wasn't supposed to be such a selfish bitch. That dumb scene, where Danny was confronted. The was supposed to be played straight, where he never saw the con, and Danny was supposed to be a big asshole. The keystrokes changed, I tell you. I hope you liked it. I'm not sure I do. This is the last time I buy a light bulb, with a gamma radiation warning on it. Do I look green to you?

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Danny is young, maybe almost her son's a

ge. Maybe she goes back to him. Perhaps more details of her liaison with young Danny would have made this tale more racy.

RimmerdalRimmerdalabout 2 months ago

I tried to read this again.

While it was well written.

The story line failed for me.

Gamma radiation will do that for you or bulk you up.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Carol should kick her to the curb! She busted her ass to get them back together only to have her mother kick her in the teeth. Cut her loose and walk away!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

People who try and save a marriage after one is a multiple or repeat offender are fools. She should have never had the second chance. What a worthless piece of shit. She should have had her time in the ring with carol just before being bounced out of the house. Of course the story would have been a lot different from that point. But, at least it would have been realistic.

You cheat, your gone. No muss no fuss, hard to enjoy a cruise when your dragging a diseased piece of shit behind the boat. Cut it loose and leave it to the sharks.

MasterKoteMasterKote11 months ago

Too bad the daughter wasn't more of a bitch to the mother after all she put them through. That would've made the story so much better

tonyneatotonyneato11 months ago

Once a Cheater ... Nice story

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

In what universe is this absurd final chapter rated a 4.4? Wtf? More like 1-2 stars. Was already a bit of chaotic trainwreck and hoped author could pull it off somehow buy instead because a total derailment.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

This chapter no sense. Her change when she started working at the new job, flirting all the time, supposedly never desiring her husband sexually ever since she fucked Danny, even though we see in their first lovemaking session post his hospital stay, as her orgasming over and over and it not being faked, her sudden lack of interest in therapy or any remaining guilt, her arrogance that he would ever take her back, her stupidity in thinking that Carol and Ben and Mark would continue the adultery lie by omission crap, her divorcing her husband knowing that her kids would be severely affected and their relationship negatively impacted, in some cases to the point of near dissolution except with Carol, her complete lack of remorse in needing to "stretch her wings". What the heck happened? Was worried it was steering towards a weird covered up RAAC, but she just blew through everything Carol, Ben et al worked out with Janice and just stabbed Jim in the back...again. all because what she had 10 inches from Danny on theee separate occasions? Yeah she had "spots", buy in this story they just became crazy stripes. Wtf? Janice went from almost catatonically remorseful in earlier chapters (with admittedly a big betrayal) to suddenly a supremely selfish bitch? Why did author just maim his own story? BTB troll comments? Why did I waste all this time reading a story that went not just off the rails but batshit crazy the last chapter? Uggh. Time is too valuable to waste on this. Sigh.

mainer42mainer42about 1 year ago

the wife was not trustworthy over time. Those spots will never change

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Good fun.

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