All Comments on 'Carpe Diem Ch. 01'

FANTASTIC!!! HOT!!! More importantly, this story is very well written and nicely paced!!! Wow, I look forward to more of this story!!!

I hope you enjoyed the opening chapter of the tale of Amanda and Josh. There are more to come so check back soon. Also, take a moment to comment and rate if you want. I love getting feedback from readers. --Petitmort

Masterful storytelling, equally believable from both perspectives you present! So f*** hot!

I got to the end of page one and reached the conclusion that this was not just a well written story (very well written) it was hot as hell. You’ve found a follower and a very grateful reader.

Hope they continue pleasing each other.

Does sexy Josh have any sexy chest hair for that manly, muscular chest? Maybe a healthy treasure trail? A spread of chest hair across the upper chest is a very sexy sight on a man, and his dark hair would be perfect!

Charming premise.

Well written. Nice buildup. Takes its time getting to the sex, and then the sex takes its time too. No rushing to a conclusion.

Five stars.

Holy tamales! HOT!! The build up of both story and sexual tension is very good. You start to engage as though you were reading a true account. This includes Part 2. Well done.

During a business trip I submitted to my boss. I loved the feeling of a cock other than my husband's sliding into me the first time. That feeling of being filled up, of my internals having to adjust to the penetration, all combined with erotic sensations was always one of the best sensations to me. There was always an added element of thrill when the cock belonged to somebody other than my husband. It added that erotic excitement of being illicit.

In Zurich you would say grüezi, not guten tag.

Whew ! I found myself holding my breath while she was giving him the very sensual massage. I could literally feel her hands on my back and legs as she slowly stroked him. Incredibly well written. A very easy 5-😊😊😊😊😊