by petitmort
Outstanding. Could have fleshed out the resolution a bit more, but don't take that as a complaint
Thanks for reading my series Carpe Diem! I had fun getting in the heads of the characters and seeing where the story led. I greatly appreciate all the comments from readers. You help me be a better writer. Cheers, Petitmort
I wish you’d continue this story or write another about a boss and an employee. I’m so attracted to my boss and this story makes me so hot. I’ve read it so many times.
Thanks for the comments! If you like this story, you may well enjoy another workplace series I wrote -- Sex Sells. It's about a charismatic boss who hires a talented protégé and soon elevates her to full partner (in more ways than one.) Here's the link: https://literotica.com/s/sex-sells-ch-01
Really good story. Well done. I think Netflix could make a mini series out of this.
The series was an enjoyable romp, with extraordinary details to set the scenes and allow the characters to develop.
BRAVO ! Well done. Great plot and story line. The execution was done very well. One little nit pick: please don’t use the word “frenulum.” I know what it means, but this isn’t a biology class. I’m guessing 99 out of a hundred wouldn't have a clue. Plus, it sounds like you went to a thesaurus to find a substitute for “under the head of his cock.” Enough about that. Aside from that tiny “mistake”, I have to say this story moved to the top of my all time favorites list. Smart, well written, believable, and sexy as hell.
I can’t wait to read more of your amazing works. The easiest 5-😊😊😊😊😊’s ever.
finally, a measure of the sophistication and complexity that the story had been begging for ... five stars for this chapter