All Comments on 'Carpe Diem Ch. 04'

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Mike9947Mike9947almost 3 years ago

How nice! Carpe Diem!

DCCoffeemanDCCoffeemanalmost 3 years ago

Thanks for a fun story and a satisfying conclusion.

muskyboymuskyboyalmost 3 years ago

Outstanding. Could have fleshed out the resolution a bit more, but don't take that as a complaint

petitmortpetitmortover 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks for reading my series Carpe Diem! I had fun getting in the heads of the characters and seeing where the story led. I greatly appreciate all the comments from readers. You help me be a better writer. Cheers, Petitmort

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Just discovered you. Best erotica I have read here

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I wish you’d continue this story or write another about a boss and an employee. I’m so attracted to my boss and this story makes me so hot. I’ve read it so many times.

petitmortpetitmortover 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks for the comments! If you like this story, you may well enjoy another workplace series I wrote -- Sex Sells. It's about a charismatic boss who hires a talented protégé and soon elevates her to full partner (in more ways than one.) Here's the link: https://literotica.com/s/sex-sells-ch-01

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Really good story. Well done. I think Netflix could make a mini series out of this.

DrizdartDrizdart12 months ago

The series was an enjoyable romp, with extraordinary details to set the scenes and allow the characters to develop.

StubbyoneStubbyone9 months ago

BRAVO ! Well done. Great plot and story line. The execution was done very well. One little nit pick: please don’t use the word “frenulum.” I know what it means, but this isn’t a biology class. I’m guessing 99 out of a hundred wouldn't have a clue. Plus, it sounds like you went to a thesaurus to find a substitute for “under the head of his cock.” Enough about that. Aside from that tiny “mistake”, I have to say this story moved to the top of my all time favorites list. Smart, well written, believable, and sexy as hell.

I can’t wait to read more of your amazing works. The easiest 5-😊😊😊😊😊’s ever.

anchorman021anchorman0214 months ago

finally, a measure of the sophistication and complexity that the story had been begging for ... five stars for this chapter

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