All Comments on 'Carried Away'

Perhaps a bit more tension before sex, perhaps a accidental touching while looking through the telescope? But I enjoyed it. Thanks

good story you did I like it alot I hope you do more of this story

This was a good story that deserves a sequel, or at least tell what happened afterwords. It was unprotected sex afterall.

Really loved your story. Thanks for sharing a fine talent.

Really loved your story. Thanks for sharing a fine talent.

This was nothing short of amazing how about more chapters

Good story, but I was distracted by the run on sentences and grammar. Just something to keep in mind for the next one. Look forward to it! :)

Hot really hot !

once again this idiot leaves a story unfinished what a waste of time this needs to be deleted and the idiot banned.

GOOD story, but I wonder how many weeks or maybe months it'll take'em to get preggers?

Wimp