All Comments on 'Carter and I Ch. 01'

Nice start

Good start. Looking forward to more :)

It sounds as if they would like to get back together, but need to talk through some things. Can Carter have some blond chest hair on that wonderfully beautiful masculine muscular chest?

OMG, the angst of high school revolving romance. How did any of us survive those years? Your submission stirs up so many bittersweet memories. Although the beginning chapter is quite short, it sustains their extremely brief past relationship and their current situation. I hope chapter two covers a thorough serious discussion so a real story can develop for Jordan and Carter. Good luck.

How do you make such a sweet story so short? unless you plan to post the next part really soon...