All Comments on 'Case of the Black Badge Ch. 02'

I am very much enjoying the case you are building. I really enjoyed that you let Laura slip that little bit about how Melina can't be found to have psychological issues for some unknown reason. I think I have that figured out. I'm not sure but I have a hunch. I hope we see that seed sprout and bear fruit during this case. Either way I continue to enjoy your writing, thank your for this gift and the future gifts you will give us!

There will be more to come (pun fully intended). It got so deep I had to split things up: "Black Badge" is just the first of three series over the (fictional) summer, so if the answers you seek aren't in this series... stay tuned!

I'm compelled to come back for more! I really enjoy these characters...

Melina was the motorcycle rider. My guess is she is some how involved with Laura and the CIA.

These last few chapters are the best. I went back and started from the beginning. Theresa's Christmas seems out of order. I do not need nearly as much detailed sex but it is well written. But, this story and the character development all in all is quite superb. I haven't commented up until now, but I am glad that I don't have to wait for succeeding chapters......

Is it too obvious to be Julie Newton? Or is that a red herring?

Totally agree that the cyclist is Melina. We learned that she became very skilled in martial arts, shooting and bow/arrow shooting during her teenage years. She was recruited by Laura in college before she meet Don.

However I can’t explain her potential lapse during her years with Don not doing anything harmful to others. Guess I’ll read on to learn the secrets.

*****Another great chapter. Thanks for sharing.