All Comments on 'Case of the Murdered Lovers Ch. 01'

This is getting good. I love a good mystery, and it's even hotter with sex thrown into the mix. I wrote somethng similar a few yers ago but sex wasn't the main theme; this aready has me wondering what's going to turn up next. Very nicely written.

Interesting.

****Thanks for the read. The sex took a little from the story to me.

Great introduction to your canon of work, however you actually need to indicate which is your first story in the series as the intro to this story gives protagonists names etc but NOT the titles and so it’s a guessing game. I guessed wrong so started here. Not unhappy, just confused because I thought such a good writer would have the nous to get a newby to read the intro and see if it makes sense, or at least the same sense as to the author who knows their work intimately