All Comments on 'Cass and John'

Damn ! SO well told.

Good story. But I must ask..has ANYONE ever heard of siblings being prosecuted under those old blue laws? When Mrs Al and I moved here, it turned out there was a brother and sister living together not more than a half mile away. They pretty much kept to themselves, although she bowled two nights a week and I knew lots of people who knew her. The brother worked at one of the factories in town. Now you know I am talking some years ago, as I don’t thing there are many factories in any American towns now. Sad but true.

Nobody bothered them and they certainly didn’t bother anyone else.

So, to Old Al, the story is MOST BELIEVABLE as I have personally seen the same situation. Only difference was the couple here lived in this area their whole lives. No hiding to cover up. They were some years older than me and have been dead a good ten years now.

The real lide reference gave your story a whole new level of meaning. Good job!

You hit all the points of a great story in this genre. Love, lust, an emotional bond transcending time. Well written with decent buildup and solid character development. 5*

5 stars, wonderful story!

Good premise.

Overwhelmed by the puns, though.

When sexual interaction occurs, it moves along much too fast with a distinct lack of details. For example: He plays/kisses/licks/sucks her breasts for 20 minutes. And all we hear is a statement that that took place.

And, frankly, from my perspective it would have been better if she had to seduce him when he was hesitant. So many possibilities here.

Four stars -- but barely.

A beautiful story, brilliantly told. Thank you

Great Story!

Hope it's based on real memories and experiences.

Love and cherished.

I found the puns to be an endearing aspect of Cass's personality. I've known some punsters in real life who'd give her a run for her money. Love the detail about Ireland as well. I'm planning a post-pandemic trip to the Emerald Isle and look forward to seeing some of the sites you've vividly portrayed. Beautiful sibling love story - thanks for sharing!

More description of the erotic elements would be a real asset here...

Other than that, excellent!

So good, that I wish it was longer, or that there were more chapters.

I once was a Tuna Fisherman, but I gave it up just for the Halibut!

The puns added a nice window into Cassie's personality. I easily pictured her to be light hearted and mischievous. A wonderful and tender love story. I was a little bit surprised that Cassie didn't fight harder to convince John to acknowledge his feelings for her. But she boar her pain stoicly. 5/5

Great story. Loved it. Don't know what else to say about it. Seems as good a place as any to end it. Write another story similar to it.

Why did the coffee not have any attitude? Because it was well grounded...!

Cassie, our queen! <3

Another wonderful story by a talented writer, and another memory invoked by your subject. My partner, although not my sibling and I visited Ireland because I am from a potato famine Irish Immigrant family who immigrated here, and we stayed in a farm B&B just outside Galway, and in the morning we could look out our window and see the cows grazing. Guess there is some attachment, for this is a second of your stories to do this. Thank you. JEF

I really enjoyed the story. AAAAAA++++++

This is perfect. Its really hard to find story like this.

I'm glad i found this.

Excellent, heartwarming story! My heart ached for them and I hoped for the happy ending that came. Enjoyed the puns too. Cherry on top was the Lack of spelling and grammatical errors; I find those distracting to the story. You are a gifted author. 5 Stars!

Good story but feels a little unfinished I think it needs another chapter to give it a proper finish you could explore there relationship with each other in a little more detail like does she get pregnant do they get officially married since they can do so legally in Ohio so many ways to explore this more and give it a proper ending you can't really count on 1 hand either way it's a good story

OK premise.

Puns really didn't add anything except digressions.

Sex was much too automatic. Too fast.

Once the blowjob was going on, needed many more details. How did it feel to him? How did it feel to her?

No playing with his balls? Why?

She never asked if he jerked off. Or if he ever thought about her while jerking off? If so, what did he imagine?

Three stars.

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Que Romantique!

11/10!!!!!