by Christian Black
like Christian this one evolved mixed feelings in my mind. But after all I think it is a really fascinating and intriguing story and imho very well written.
It was well written, and I liked how it involved the emotions of the characters, but it was so strange... maybe because I know people who could have taken her place. And that is why they act so strange...
There's a woman I know, who is Cassandra's spitting image in personality. She and I are nothing but friends, or were, but her ex is one of my best friends, and I always wondered why she acted so wierd... then I found out it was because her father had raped her. So this story kinda hit home for me, and it was just too strange.
I think the author got the emotions of the characters right & that is what's freaking readers out.
I like this story enough to give it a rating of 75-100 but then the whole thing with her being a crazy ass freaky controlling slag just made me rate it 25....The whole your name even sounds like carson, christian, it doesn't sound anything like carson lol, also compairing everything about her boyfriend to carson was stupid as that show's she has no feelings of any king toward christian and she just really want's carson, basically the female character's a bunny boiling pyschopath :D
Not your typical incest tale, but I was pulled in slowly by your story. I thought the emotions and dialogue were very realistic and moving. When she spoke of her half brother simply leaving and never contacting her again, I could feel her hurt and heartache. Christian describing how he was at once very aroused yet also jealous and threatened by the prior relationship she had with Carson, was very well done. Kudos.
I like it. It was different.
I was just so confused with where the story was going to go.
She had a dark secret and it wasn't even that big of a deal. Well that's what I was thinking while reading.
The way it was written was really good. The emotions are there, the description is really good. You connect with the character and when she's telling him the story you pretty much feel like Christian.
The incest as a bad taboo is more recent when looking at the history of man. From the ancients through the monarchy incest ruled. Only in the last few hundred years has it been looked at as bad. This poor child needs psychological help. I hate sex stories where someone is so mentally ill like this. Takes all the fun out of the fantasy.