by CaliforniaEveryman
That was a lot of fun. I hope you bring us more stories of these three loving people.
Great Story with a nice flow that I could imagine happening. I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep Writing!
There are so many more tales to be told in this dynamic. 5 stars well earned!
considering how short it was, it was a good story with some character development... nicely done!
Hot story! This well deserved a another chapter or two. Please do it very soon. Thank you.
Like getting a second wife, it feels so natural to take care of the new woman living under a mans roof.
R.
Great story - believable, if not wishful thinking. Can't wait for more - will Cassie ever leave?
Wow, thank you all for the feedback! There may be a chapter two (and more) in here sometime soon. I'm just starting out, so we'll see how this all goes. Thanks for the stars!
The transition to sex was a little quick. I would have liked to see a little more hesitation from the SIL. But overall the story was great. 5*s
Story was very good with really sexy scenes. I guess there will be more and looking forward to it. 5/5
was a gruesome account of a married man on his way to becoming a toy. Sad, really sad.
I think it was hot. The part where one sister eats the other was over the top. He should have licked the pussy juice from his wife's face.
There is a good beginning here, and your readers definitely want more chapters. This story can take a lot of different directions, we are waiting for you to surprise us. Good editing and grammar. Keep writing.
XYZ
Fantastic. No massive fits and 14 inch cock. A great story. Well edited and good character descriptions. This needs a part two and I see you are still writing because you submitted a story recently. This could be a great series. We need the lesbian, anal and further Three some done right. You are the perfect writer for the job. Five stars with more to follow. Thanks for writing.