by kiwi91
SexNovella - You need to do a better job editing.
Very Sexy Story. I can't wait to read the next chapter(s)
I agree with the other commenter. Your story is sexy and made me so, so wet. I enjoyed reading it, however, better editing would make this story read much better. I can't wait for you to reveal the next chapter. Toodles!!! :-)
Please write a Chapter 4!!!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!
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