All Comments on 'Castaways Ch. 02'

mind blowing sex and good winning out against evil. What more could you want?

Awesome chapter 2! I'm glad those bad guys died! And ooh la la on the sex scene!

Great story. Lots of drama and sex. How will they survive?

You've got me waiting for the next chapter. Very good.

Excellant, more please soon!

good vanquished evil, he got the girl, all is good so far

why bother to bury them? just haul them out to the water and let the sharks and fish have a treat. em's killing duane was great: em 1, duane, 0 . wonder if our ms. em is into anal?

Let crabs etc have them. 3 why only 2 did idiot stop for even a second

Why average

Army?

Dumb storytelling and it started off good. For being former army he sure makes tons of stupid decisions and can't fight worth crap. He should have made spears and hunted those guys down. Letting any of the live after attacking the girl was stupid. This whole thing is a huge disappointment.

You have some serious English language vocabulary remedial work to do.

As Written Intended

Boardering bordering

Verved veered

Contented contended

Rundown running down

Extolled For god’s sake stop trying to sound like some kind of super-intellectual.

“…He hadn't peed before going to bed, like usual, and now he had a pee hard-on because of it…”

OK, that’s not what causes morning wood.

“…his wife and previous girlfriends had wooed enough over his cock…”

OK, that’s not what ‘woo’ means.

No one's ever done that to me before," John avowed.

‘Avowed’? You are far too much in love with whatever thesaurus you are using.