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All Comments on 'Casting Spells'

by SexyHighZombie

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LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 10 years ago
Woman vs. women

Get it straight!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
LEFT A BIG GAP IN CONTINUITY

Setting this aside and coming back to it after a week would, perhaps, brought about a better story.

strictmaster12880SWBstrictmaster12880SWBover 10 years ago
To LarryInSeattle

Thank you! I was just about to write the same comment!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I liked it...

Don't be discouraged by the critics...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

You defiantly need more details.. Sorry but that story sucked.

BahamaBahamaover 10 years ago
Nice

I liked it. I hope you continue this

JuliaHandelJuliaHandelover 10 years ago

Good example of maintaining consistent point of view and tense.

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