All Comments on 'Casus Belli Ch. 01: Prelude to War'

Hmmm, I'm happy these orcs actually have some morals and common sense. I feel terrible for them, having their loved ones killed and it wasnt even the right tribe! And they killed their women and children which tells me that the soliders didnt even have the honor to fight with the actual orc soldiers, they did the cowardly thing and went after the least vulnerable! I'm intrigued to see how this story plays out!

Hi guys and gals, I have an update for you.

While writing chapter two I realized you lot could probably do with a map of Nigawa.

So I made a map, which took a bit of time, which is the main reason chapter two isn’t published yet.

And for good measure I added a floor plan of Bromodin castle’s central keep too.

You can find the images in my Imgur Literotica album by using the link on my Literotica Profile page.

Please keep in mind that both are work in progress…

Banbeck

Update 12/23/2021

Edit got published today.

Hi guys and gals.

I wanted to let you know that I just submitted chapter 2 to Lit for publishing.

Things got delayed a bit by the above mentioned map and floor plan, and then the holidays caused even more delay, so thanks for your patience.

two questions. If it's not too much spoiler territory what do you mean by an unusual love? I thought maybe you were gonna have her fall for the orc chief but she seems really in love with brando. and you said it was a slow burn but they are already pretty intimate. Maybe you meant physically and not emotionally? like the fact that there's no penetration?

Also question about Moiga, was she a virgin before she was sodomized? I'm not sure if she was supposed to be or not as I can reference points that she was and that she wasn't. But that's just curiosity and it seeming kinda contradictory to me.

Hi Sniperking.

First, thanks for commenting, it's always appreciated :)

To your questions; the “slow burn” relates to the fact that, in the first chapters at least, there isn’t going to be sex on every page, and it also relates to the fact that it’s going to be a long story leading up to a “main event”.

Second; Yes, Cassandra is very much in love with Brando, but that’s not the unusual love at the end of the harsh road mentioned in chapter one’s description, because that description is meant for the series, and not for the chapter itself.

Last; Cassandra and her maidens are of varied experience, sexually speaking. Polly, for instance, is a true virgin, but Cassandra, as she has had plenty of sex already, is more a “technical” virgin, and yes, Moiga was an anal virgin.

I have a question for you too; did you read the cautionary?

I ask this because that, and the tags, should give you a pretty good idea about where this story is, ultimately, going.

This is a story about great loss, and about finding love again where you least expected it.

The fact that what you expected didn't happen yet doesn't mean it isn't going to happen...