by neuroparenthetical
Very well done. If his is your first story, congratulations are definitely in order.
At first I thought you were trying a little too hard with the melodic-wordiness, and almost bailed on the story. But then you introduced the sexy professor, with glasses, sheer top, and butt plug up her ass, and locked my interest. And then the post-run anal in the shower was HOT!!! I'm still trying to gather my thoughts on the closing scene, which normally would not interest me, but you made it a compelling ending! Cudos!!
At least give a scat warning or something, damn dude. That's just... nasty.
We could've done without that last bit, but other than that this was a very well-written and erotic story. Great job on your first story here.