All Comments on 'Cat Needs More Than Just A Shower'

by neuroparenthetical

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300WSM300WSMabout 2 years ago

Very well done. If his is your first story, congratulations are definitely in order.

StrappySandalsStrappySandalsabout 2 years ago

At first I thought you were trying a little too hard with the melodic-wordiness, and almost bailed on the story. But then you introduced the sexy professor, with glasses, sheer top, and butt plug up her ass, and locked my interest. And then the post-run anal in the shower was HOT!!! I'm still trying to gather my thoughts on the closing scene, which normally would not interest me, but you made it a compelling ending! Cudos!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

At least give a scat warning or something, damn dude. That's just... nasty.

DanDraperDanDraperabout 2 years ago

We could've done without that last bit, but other than that this was a very well-written and erotic story. Great job on your first story here.

Rainyday493Rainyday493about 2 years ago

Isn't this just the nastiest side of dirty and hot. Loved it.

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikeyabout 2 years ago

That was pretty fucking hot!...Damn.

VerbalAbuseVerbalAbuse8 months ago

What is that final stubborn barrier? I want to know.

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I'm terminally boring. You're getting the most interesting parts; trust me.