All Comments on 'Catalyst'

Really liked the twists and turns in the story. I thought it was a good read, thank you.

Pretty good. With some originality until the last couple of pages. The submissive mc'd girl is a cliche. The ending disappointed, though looks like you might be planning on continuing.

A few typos and errors, eg, lead instead of led.

This is by far my favorite story; I come back to re-read it all the time. It is perfect. The plot, dialogue, word choice, prose... And it encompasses all my deepest fantasies. I hope you keep writing. I cant tell you how much I want to read more of your work. :)