All Comments on 'Catch of the Day'

So glad you are back! Happy new year!

Love, Abi

This story put a smile on me. And thank you... I would enjoy meeting a Kaitlin this year. Better yet, being like a Kaitlin😎

not bad, I like your love stories

...to see that you're back on a sappy romance kick, Wax, you do them so well. This is the usual mixture of warmth and tenderness with a soupcon of the bitter-sweet. The story is right up there with your similar tales such as Speedy Delivery and Lemongrass. Keep 'em coming!

...and very elegant writing.

This is a nice way to start the New Year. Thanks for a beautiful little story.

Superb.

But cheese-eating grin? Is that a Wisconsin thing?

Short, sweet and really nice. Thank you.

Thank you for sharing!

JPGmvny: The cheese-eating grin is just a milder form of the popular shit-eating grin. I don't know the etymology, but it's something I grew up hearing. I thought it was a good fit for Jackie's innocence. The girl can't even utter the word 'fuck' in the middle of an orgasm, so I'm pretty sure all her grins are the cheese-eating variety.

And for the anonymous Abi: I never really left. I've just been hanging out in SciFi/Fantasy for a while with a serial tale called Dance Until the World Ends. I chose SciFi/Fantasy because the setting is in the distant future, but in all honesty it could fit right in the Lesbian category with the heroine and her BFF being lovers throughout.

And for everyone else: Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave comments. I really enjoy reading them. Make the best of the new year!

I too, love sappy love stories! These two are adorable together, and deserve a sequel!

You do these slice of life stories so well. A wonderful little feel good story to start the New Year off. I would love to hear the backstory to these two ladies though.

As always, thank you for sharing it with us.

We needed this.

I know it was a day brightener on a day without a lot of lightheartedness. Thank you for showing the good side of spontaneity!

Very real, and very sweet! Thank you!

This was really cute! :)

Nice and sweet story. Thank goodness Cap'n Dave has such a nice car. I'm a fan of your sloppy romances. Please more of them! Thanks WP

......... short, sweet and sappy stories.

It sorta reminds me of another of yours ........ yellow something? or something like that rofl :P

As always, well written and full of amazing mental imagery.

Kaitlin and Jackie, two brilliant characters, both with their own baggage and scars, which keeps the story on the right side of sappy romance.

I do love your slice of life stories and this was brilliant as always

Thank you WP

Jc

🐳Whale watching

👵Aunt Sarah and her many names

🌇Sunset romance

🍦Icecream anyone

🌋A nice climax each

As always a very good story. I think it's the first one on Lit that I've read that deals or even mentions suicide. You handled that very well. I also liked the whole sunset trip and how they returned the car.

J

Beautiful. So well done!

Your slice of life stories are the best. Just enough and you're done.

Excellent … but I wonder just how many people missed finding their Kaitlin because of how that year turned out.

Delightful