by BadAllison
Chapter 2 was hot but I can't wait for the son to confront the mom to see what she's willing to do for his silence. Come on chapter 3!
I love both chapters. They have been great. I'm really looking forward to the rest of the story. Just one thing. WRITE FASTER.
Very hot chapter. You write very well and it's very exciting to read your story.
Keep writing please.
Build up is perfect. Brother/sister sex in the forefront with the subject of Mom in the background still to be addressed. This is one top notch story. Eagerly anticipating more. Thanks for writing.
max052
You have one hot story going here .I'm loving it .More please and soon . You made my favorite list .Double 5's if I could ..
Seems like He will be getting his mom, Ally and Hannah sexually by the end of this storyline.
Well these two definitely aren't selfish and the son isn't an asshole. What is the intention of the piece of crap? To only be a description about sex or to make the readers despise the characters?
I got off this morning wanking to chapter 1. Just read chapter 2 and my old pecker got hard again. Please wait until tomorrow to submit chapter 3!
A good beginning just got better. I look forward to seeing the places you will go! great oral exchange for the sibs. Who would not want more! Thanks
I wanted to give these first two stories a 10. Can't wait for the next chapter
This is a really good piece. Great circumstance; realistic writing and descriptive enough for good visuals. My own breath was getting shallow there and I'm really anticipating Chapters 3 and hopefully beyond.
As a writer and reader of incest stories, I can't wait to read what the son has in store for his mom. From the buildup, I know that this story will only get better. Keep it up. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow great writing! Really great level of detail and a nice steady build of tension to climax. You left me dripping with both stories and then your profile picture just put the icing on the cake! I can't wait to read more of your writing!
This is a well written story, that my pussy so wet i had to change my sheets lol. Cant wait to read more. xxxxx