by GoodSon
these two are so eager to be with each other I have to wonder what is in their future. Does he knock her up and they get found out? Will they live together? So much more fun to come I hope.
The last chapter was better. I had assumed he was single & lived by himself. Now, he’s got a wife & kids sharing his apartment. In this chapter, sex in the lift is referred to. I don’t remember them having sex in the elevator.
IT HAS BEEN A END AND SOMEONE HAS LEFT US HANGING WITH ANOTHER UNFINISHED STORY. WHY I ASK. SO MANY QUESTIONS FOR A STORY WELL WRITTEN AND WELL TOLD. SOMEONE COMMENTED THAT THAT CHAPTER ONE WAS BETTER. THIS IS TRUE. BUT, I FEEL WHAT MADE IT TRUE WAS THE BEAUTIFUL BUILDUP AND ANTICIPATION OF THE LUSTFUL ROMP TO A HOT CLIMAX.