by hot_honey
Great grammar, pacing and build-up; a very enjoyable and well written story, 5 stars!
Excellent story, and I agree, terrific grammar and writing skill! ...and finally a writer on here that just doesn't jump in and say that anal sex is all easy and painless and good. I think so many writers here give people that have never had anal sex false expectations and they will either have a big surprise coming when they try, or wind up hurting someone. :/
...a nice, clean ending that left the story in s comfortable place without having to write in a moving in together (or other type of) ending.
Thanks and will look forward to more stuff!
Absolutely loved the story, as well as the honesty and emotion between the siblings. You wrote what is possibly the best sex scene I've read in a long time, and you did it all without butchering the English language. Brilliant work, 5 stars.