All Comments on 'Cathie and Chris'

by MarcoTambo

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Turtle1952Turtle1952over 6 years ago
Oh more please

what a lovely tale of lust love and erotic play. Please write some more of this story.

sabra16023sabra16023over 6 years ago
More-- More

Good story. Calls for more chapters. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Nicely done!

Tender and compassionate. More please.

thedayafterthedayafterover 6 years ago
Gentle Story

As the previous Anon said..... nicely done....

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
A gentle and tender love story

What a beautiful story.

A story full of love and devotion.

Hope you have another chapter after the flat is finished

Robinius1Robinius1over 6 years ago
Wow!

Very, very, very good! How, in two pages, you made me care about these two and what happens with them is beyond me. I wish I had your talent for writing and storytelling.

If you'd like to tell us more about Cathie and Chris I'd love to read about them. If not, my imagination is giving me some very nice and sexy ideas. Thank you!!

TJSkywindTJSkywindover 6 years ago
Not bad for a short tale

The only detraction was the appearance of Chloe in place of Cathie.

Thanks for sharing. 5* Slainté

honybipolahonybipolaover 6 years ago
your tender hot stories

and sibling romances have something that makes them not just erotic but remarkable and the characters unforgettable...keep picking your brain for more great ideas and share them with us, your avid readers

JagnagJagnagover 6 years ago
Thanks

Enjoyed that, thanks 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Cathie and Chris... and Chloe?

Who the hell is Chloe? Did I miss the part where Cathie had multiple personalities?

LegallySaneLegallySaneabout 3 years ago
Beautiful

just fucking Beautiful. And you know what else, it's a great place to STOP.....

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